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Straight Shot Room V2 by ~Slyjester:iconSlyjester:

Categories Designs & Interfaces > Advertising

©2005-2009 ~Slyjester
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Here is version 2. Obviously some major changes. Gave her a pool stick thingy (has no idea what they are called). I added color to the purple background because someone suggested it and they were right. Changed the opacity of the vector stuff because I thought it was a little distracting. Hopefully I picked the right font this time lol. I decided to leave the 3 stripes on the bottom because It looked bare without it. I actually made a little Pac-man figure, but it didnt fit, so I just left it out. It's an arcade room too, but the main business is the poolhall. So, what could I do better?

Photoshop & Illustrator CS

The white lines behind the sillouhete is from ~spiritsighs-stock . Thanks

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~DZane Jun 3, 2005, 7:43:33 PM
sweet it looks better than the other version without the pool balls
yeah first post

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~strepsil Jun 3, 2005, 9:11:19 PM
perfect perfect perfect.

Only one thing itches me...is the '8' doesn't look like its proportioned right, but I do understand how hard it is to do.
Great work :)

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~Slyjester Jun 3, 2005, 9:23:17 PM
*phew* lol

THANKS for all the constructive criticism! You were a great help!

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~Democat Jun 3, 2005, 10:28:15 PM
This is much better then the last one, the pool cue (heh that's what it's called) and the balls floating around look much better.

I do however find the 8-ball and the retro font a little cliche, but that's just me and I'm not sure being edgy is going to get you the job which is definately the most important thing at this stage, I would think. good luck!!!

Oh and send my best wishes to your would be client - those sort of pool hall things have a high mortality rate around here...That sounded strangely human - the three that have opened here closed a few months later through lack of interest...I dunno why they keep making them.

Well done, and again, good luck mate!

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~motionstudy Jun 4, 2005, 1:19:48 AM
much much better that the 1st one. this one is more expressive,, and really reflects the business.. but i think the text should be larger and you have to make it as the point of interest,,maybe adding stroke or outer glow to it will help,,
very good work :)

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~Kez88 Jun 4, 2005, 1:35:30 AM
ooo I'm loving what you've done with the background and the pools balls are great! :)

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~Slyjester Jun 4, 2005, 5:48:51 AM
Thank you.

Yes, it does have an outer glow, but I lowered the opacity because it was too overwhelming. I'm sure you can see the drop shadow. I didnt add a stroke because, it didnt look right. I had tried a 1px black stroke, but it just didnt look right. Thanks for your input :)

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~Slylock-Stock Jun 4, 2005, 2:25:29 PM
cue! POOL CUE! There! You leanred a enw word today! :D

I can't tell which of the two I like better.

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